Draft Evaluation.

Name; Jodie
Title; Rewind.

Comments;

Cover-title is good, font is very retro (maybe too so) Image works well. Layout needs attention. More thought to placement of cover lines - text is very thin.

Double-Page Spread- Doesn't work.Top right image is great - others are very weak. Too many columns - you only need four on the left page.


Contents-The guy in the street style photo looks homeless- not what you want! Magazine stops at page 12  spread out pages over a full magazine 60-80 pages. Headings are messy - need work. Page no's to be added. Too many contrasting images on right page. Add imafes to R+P Posts that lack them.

R&P level; high 3.
Practical Draft Level; Top 2/Low 3.

The comments I have been given have made me look at my magazine in a different view, a more professional one. I can see how the layout looks messy and out of place as it was very rushed I will make this much more neat and tidy, i'll do this by changing the titles around and using less photo's, I have already done on this double page spread, I have done this by using one photo, I edited the photo so it looks bigger. On the front page I am going to keep the title however change the font, I am going to be using a block black as this looks more professional and stands out more, although I did want to go for an all colour theme it still looks very efficient, I am also going to keep the front page photo.