pitch feeback.

Taking other students opinions into account I have learnt that there is a huge gap in the magazine industry for my music genre magazine, with the majority saying they like the name and idea. From feedback on my mock-ups by both students and teachers it has been very positive, my idea of making it stand out has worked. Although one student said they disliked the name as it was 'copied' it did make me think, however I did not copy and spell it differently, I thought of it and then found it afterwards, I was intentionally going to change it however I thought it worked really well and couldn't find a better matched title for the magazine. The bright colours was a good idea also which I was quite held back on, I thought it could of been too messy, a bit all over the place and childish however many people like that and how it stands out. The feedback has really helped and inspired me to know what to do on my real magazine as I now have more of an understanding of what the audience like.